First, I'd like to thank everyone that sent comments; I was a bit surprised that most came off-line and/or by e-mail. Some seemed to feel that the content was (or should be) a little too proprietary (to be published upon a publicly-accessible BLOG); others, I suspect, felt that their input may have come off a little too critical.
For my own part, I was a bit taken aback by how some of the very same passages that some loved others hated; several suggested different directions altogether! For example, several folks would have liked a little more on more conventional Web 3.0 connotations (e.g. Semantic Web, Cloud Computing, etc) but others felt that that was a waste of space and we should have spent all our time on the "conflating communities" notion.
So, in the end, the paper hasn't changed that much; and, we'd welcome more input before putting a final draft of it on the shelf. PLEASE keep the "comments" (and e-mails) coming.
Anyway, here it is...
Download Web 3.0 D2.1comp
p.s., If you're not inclined to read through the whole paper again, you may want to turn to the last page "Idea In Brief"
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